There Is Nothing Like This Built Today...
Nobody searches
And nobody cares somehow
When the loving that you've wasted
Comes raining from a hapless cloud
Then I might stop and look upon your face
Disappear in the sweet
Sweet gaze
See the living that surrounds me
Dissipate in a violet place
We rejoice because the hurting becomes so painless
I am married to your charms and grace
Can't you see what you've done
To my heart
And soul
I, This is no wasteland now
And nobody cares somehow
When the loving that you've wasted
Comes raining from a hapless cloud
Then I might stop and look upon your face
Disappear in the sweet
Sweet gaze
See the living that surrounds me
Dissipate in a violet place
We rejoice because the hurting becomes so painless
I am married to your charms and grace
Can't you see what you've done
To my heart
And soul
I, This is no wasteland now
post by BD
4 Comments:
The meeting became a connection, the connection developed into a link, the link grew to a bond, entwined?
Hopefully...
There is knowing?
1908-1909
This is the first time that you created a post like this, it's the first time we have ever seen anything like this. Did you write the piece before linking or did you write with the links in mind? D thinks this is also the first time you mentioned that you were violet. And we just realized that you have mentioned marriage, just never in a plain context. We like how you speak of the two inputs and finish on the result. I liked following the links, made me look at some things in a much more educated way. The done link that goes to a beautiful little story with a story in the comments, I really like reading the communications you have in the comments, you should do it more often. The link to You on The Other Side Of The Circle was very touching, because you became the You, who Just Thinking wrote about, I also liked your comment there, your poems are not of any traditional or typical quality but they certainly capture feeling. The wasteland link, I couldn't follow - Just Thinking doesn't see you as a King yet is the Queen - what does that mean? D says you are growing into a role for Just Thinking. What was the significance of linking it to the word wasteland? I hope you can clear the air with a few of these in an email, its a very interesting poem and we'd like to know more. Whats going on with these comments? Whats the year? I thought of the Titanic, it was only thing I could think of report in 1909. We have just finished reading The Other Side Of The Circle, and we are very impressed with Just Thinking's writing. A different and less centric style but very easy to connect with, when she writes of you its different again but enjoyable whereas we have found you are more subtle, touching and thought or feeling provoking. D says that you think about Just Thinking the way every woman wants to be thought of, I just thought you were professing and even at my age I can't claim to know what women think, I'm lucky if I know what D is thinking. Hope to hear from you soon. Chris
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